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    dots Submission Name: Personal Thoughts on the worlddots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
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    dotsPersonal Thoughts on the worlddots
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    Please read my thoughts...and comment if u understand what's written

    If u had to be something what would u be? if being yourself means standing in the viewpoint of someone else, choosing to live the way someone else tells you, doing what other people tell u to do, not having any freedoms because u r afraid of being alone. Is that that u are? Are you free? True freedom, the only place that u can do whatever u want. It's impossible to find. For complete freedom is where there are only you. Taking whatever form, items, and believing what u want. Death is the only indication of freedom. U r free from the bonds that keep you from becoming whole. For as a human being, u have feelings, u have believes to live by, but there are others that change what u think. But what r u? Who r u? Are you truly u? Or just an image of what other people think u r? What are you? If there r other versions of yourself in other people views of you, does that mean u r the true you, or are you just a view of someone? Is it truly right to feel alone when u doesn't exist? If u r only a view of someone, then u can't be alone. So how r u lonely? Your world is always changing, so there is no correct answer. Or is there a correct question? Do we even exist? Dolls are creations of man, on mans whim to be able to control something. To feel needed. To be praised. If that is what we r, are we not just dolls to the Creator? People change, things change, the world around us is always changing. We r always adapting. The way your life is now will not be the same tomorrow. Everything will eventually change. But nothing is lost. Everything is a cycle. Life, death, life again. Everything repeats. All will come back to the original state. The is no such thing as nothing. There is no void. There is nothing that can destroy. All it can do is revert. What r u? Who r u? Does u live by other people's views of you? Do you really exist? Do u need others to praise you to feel worth something? Will u be fine if your role vanishes? Or will you vanish along with your role.... what do u fear? Do u fear being alone, falling into darkness, being shut out of the light? ...Do u fear death.... or do u embrace the freeing shadows of the eternal life? The true independence. We must evolve, we must adapt to get threw life. If this does not happen, then we will all perish. So who r u really? Just a view of someone? Something that doesn't exist, something that has a role, then vanishes when the role is finished? Or will you adapt, will u change? Will you do what u need to do on your own? Or will you depend on others to get u threw everything.....will u make them give it to u....or will u get it yourself...? Will u face your fears? Or just run away and hide from reality? What is reality? Just a word? Or is it more? But this is for a later subject........

    After you read this, please take a minute and think about who u really are.




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