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Truth Told


Author: wolfgurl830
ASL Info:    18/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42 /38 /34
Words: 81
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Truth Told





Don’t know why I put up with your show
Why all the lies
Best Friend?
You were everything
Now your nothing
You healed the pain
Turned them to ugly scares
My whole world upside down
I still kind of miss you
But in a dream I said what I had to say
I said “ I hate you”
In a sad voice you sad
“you don’t really meant that”
I turn away and think
Maybe I do




Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:58:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really don't know how your life is and I'm sorry if this is a true story but I definately relate. This has happened to me and it was a terrible experience. It's hard when your friend becomes an enemy.
| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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