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    dots Submission Name: Truth Tolddots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 558
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsTruth Tolddots
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    Don’t know why I put up with your show
    Why all the lies
    Best Friend?
    You were everything
    Now your nothing
    You healed the pain
    Turned them to ugly scares
    My whole world upside down
    I still kind of miss you
    But in a dream I said what I had to say
    I said “ I hate you”
    In a sad voice you sad
    “you don’t really meant that”
    I turn away and think
    Maybe I do




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:58:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really don't know how your life is and I'm sorry if this is a true story but I definately relate. This has happened to me and it was a terrible experience. It's hard when your friend becomes an enemy.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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