Truth Told

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Truth Told

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Don’t know why I put up with your show Why all the lies Best Friend? You were everything Now your nothing You healed the pain Turned them to ugly scares My whole world upside down I still kind of miss you But in a dream I said what I had to say I said “ I hate you” In a sad voice you sad “you don’t really meant that” I turn away and think Maybe I do

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I really don't know how your life is and I'm sorry if this is a true story but I definately relate. This has happened to me and it was a terrible experience. It's hard when your friend becomes an enemy.

| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]

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