Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Coming Out


Author: wolfgurl830
ASL Info:    18/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42 /38 /34
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Trapped
Total Views: 778
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 505



Description:




Coming Out



I want to tell someone
And not look like an idiot
I want to say yeah I'm like that
And they could just accept that
I want to still be a person
I don’t want to look like a bug
To give someone a hug
And not having them think
All I want is to get with them
Because that’s not how I work
Disowned by everyone
Unless their like me
I want to come out of this shell
And not be treated like hell





Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:59:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  I like this. And I hope you can discover that you can be accepted for who you are.
| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very interesting and unusual. In some places it rhymes and in others it doesn't. It is unique. I haven't read many things like this.
| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



178149