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    dots Submission Name: Coming Outdots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 568
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 501



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    dotsComing Outdots
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    I want to tell someone
    And not look like an idiot
    I want to say yeah I'm like that
    And they could just accept that
    I want to still be a person
    I donít want to look like a bug
    To give someone a hug
    And not having them think
    All I want is to get with them
    Because thatís not how I work
    Disowned by everyone
    Unless their like me
    I want to come out of this shell
    And not be treated like hell





    Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:59:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this. And I hope you can discover that you can be accepted for who you are.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very interesting and unusual. In some places it rhymes and in others it doesn't. It is unique. I haven't read many things like this.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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