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If it was easy

Author: wolfgurl830
ASL Info:    18/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42 /38 /34
Words: 48
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Average Vote:    4.0000
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If it was easy

I like you so much
Do you know how much I want to say
Hey I like you!
But I can’t
If I could I would have said it awhile ago
But if it was easy
You would say
I like you too

Submitted on 2009-09-04 08:38:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I thought this poem was very short and simple almost too simple, but i like it. Don't know why but i do, really.
| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by LittleStevie | [ Reply to This ]
  The only advice I can tell you is to hurry and say it before it is too late.
| Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]

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