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    dots Submission Name: If it was easydots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 598
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 240



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    dotsIf it was easydots
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    I like you so much
    Do you know how much I want to say
    Hey I like you!
    But I canít
    If I could I would have said it awhile ago
    But if it was easy
    You would say
    I like you too





    Submitted on 2009-09-04 08:38:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I thought this poem was very short and simple almost too simple, but i like it. Don't know why but i do, really.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by LittleStevie | [ Reply to This ]
      The only advice I can tell you is to hurry and say it before it is too late.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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