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    dots Submission Name: Dizzasterdots
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    Author: Dizzaster
    ASL Info:    21/m/oh
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 1/4/5
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 376
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    dotsDizzasterdots
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    What is left to say when nothing matters anyway?
    It's like the world wants me dead And I'm a shadow in my head.
    But through all the lies and doubt, one thing I never figured out.
    If it was me that you despise then when I'm gone why do you cry?
    It seems we've reached disaster, sweet aroma of the fracture.
    You were only my disease, you were only all I need!





    Submitted on 2009-09-04 09:11:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this is really cool. It's deep and emotional. I really liked it. Short, sweet, and to the point. Great work.
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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