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    dots Submission Name: Baby I lieddots

    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsBaby I lieddots

    Baby I lied, I still cry for you.
    Time and again you ask if I love you.
    Baby I lie, hididng feelings its true.
    I know it now, I lied to myself again.
    You and me were never just friends.
    Baby I lied, when you asked do I love you.
    I now see my fault now was driving off,
    leaving you, that's when I lied, I did love you.
    I made wishes, you would ask me to stay,
    they never came my way, but you loved me.
    Baby I cried, my soul died, the day I lied.

    Submitted on 2009-09-04 09:52:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      whose coin did you flip anyway.
    | Posted on 2009-09-05 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Love is sometimes such a complex game, where the heart overrules the mind and vice-versa. But, when it comes to love, the heart always knows, and never ceases to remind us!

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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