Not A Child Anymore by Childe-Wrote

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Author:	Childe-Wrote
Elite Ratio:	1.78 - 17/53/44
Words:	126

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	633
Average Vote:	4.0000
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Not A Child Anymore dots

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They turn their nose up in distaste
Whispers words behind her back
And surprise strong in those eyes

She pulls her hair out in distress
Screams "stop judging me already"

She complains about the glass
She has to walk on every morning
When she falls, she has the scars

They turn their nose up in distaste
Shake their head in remorse

"You're not a child anymore"
She replies with a snap
"Stop judging me dammit"

In every action she takes
She glances behind her again
And when everyone turns their back
That facade, that disquise finally breaks

She refuses to grow old
Without wisdom of her own

You can still be a child at heart
When you're reaching ninety-nine

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this poem is nice. I love the ending. I can relate to this im not letting go of the child in my heart.

"She refuses to grow old
Without wisdom of her own

You can still be a child at heart
When you're reaching ninety-nine"

| Posted on 2009-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
a very different poem, quite unlike any I have seen before. the idea is not novel, but the way you put it sounds good. all that frustration and the facade idea sounds some what true....
| Posted on 2009-09-05 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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