waiting in another life. by PopRocksRae

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Submission Name: waiting in another life. dots

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Author:	PopRocksRae
ASL Info:	21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:	2.49 - 232/369/355
Words:	77

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	832
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	464

Description:
*short and sweet*
for mi amor de mi corazon.

waiting in another life. dots

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im still away.
waiting for another day.
does it always take this long?
until i get to be where i belong.

im still missing you.
waiting for things to do.
if i come back early will you be there?
i fell in love now i swear.

im still here, i never will leave.
your heart has followed me.
no longer am i filled with strife.
im waiting for now in another life.

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I agree with totojane, Rachi. You are quite talented, please let nobody tell you differently. You are my love, my life, my all. You're my muse, a light in the gloom of my life. This poem was amazing, but not as much as you are. I love you, honey.

~Dreamer
| Posted on 2009-09-07 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
Talented I must say, leaves me speechless.
thankyou for sharing

totojane
| Posted on 2009-09-05 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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