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    dots Submission Name: waiting in another life.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 559
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    Description:
       *short and sweet*
    for mi amor de mi corazon.


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    dotswaiting in another life.dots
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    im still away.
    waiting for another day.
    does it always take this long?
    until i get to be where i belong.

    im still missing you.
    waiting for things to do.
    if i come back early will you be there?
    i fell in love now i swear.

    im still here, i never will leave.
    your heart has followed me.
    no longer am i filled with strife.
    im waiting for now in another life.





    Submitted on 2009-09-05 00:26:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with totojane, Rachi. You are quite talented, please let nobody tell you differently. You are my love, my life, my all. You're my muse, a light in the gloom of my life. This poem was amazing, but not as much as you are. I love you, honey.

    ~Dreamer
    | Posted on 2009-09-07 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
      Talented I must say, leaves me speechless.
    thankyou for sharing

    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-09-05 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]


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