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    dots Submission Name: "A Plea For Help'dots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 484
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 992



    Description:
       This is a really old piece i found lying around so i thought i'd submit it. A bit cheesy and rhyming is awful but ja... Here it is.


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    dots"A Plea For Help'dots
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    Where did i go wrong?
    I feel as if i don't belong.
    Time drags along..
    I feel the fear..
    It sets in..Creeping near..
    I could have it all changed.
    Everything i hold dear.

    I must not give up hope..
    How else will i learn to cope?
    Please do not forsake me.
    I reject not the possibilities
    Possibly expanding before me.
    I am not ready for this.
    This is not me.

    If i deserve this
    I must conserve this.
    I am not weak..
    Not dull..
    Presently my mind's in a blender.
    One thing i need to remember:
    No matter what..
    Life's wonderful.
    Please God keep me dutiful.

    I pray not for death
    Only that you illuminate
    Help me to learn..To live..
    To stop carrying hate..
    To stop forgetting
    How important it is to forgive.
    Please God..
    Let me live..

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-09-05 07:42:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know you said that this was written a long time ago but i cant help saying a few things (i generally dont change my older pieces as i cant be bothered so i am just saying)

    3rd stanza... "matter" not "mattet" and overall, the "i" is all in small (as long as it is not the first letter in the sentence) is that on purpose (to convey how small the "i" feels?) or is that because words (or whatever program you use) did not autocaps it?

    not going to say anything else~ :X
    | Posted on 2009-09-14 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]


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