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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Them
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       One of the first pieces i wrote back when i was 15? Duno, can't remember... Haha


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    When all is said and done
    Turn away and quickly run..
    People throw sticks & stones
    For fun..

    Whenever we start to explain..
    They reply : "That's lame"
    We try to make them understand.
    Yet they will never comprehend..
    Its all just another game..

    Everywhere: narrow-minded people
    Narrow like a church's steeple..
    They say they are normal people..
    They are not, they are feeble..
    All just feeble narrow minded people.

    They say: "Don't judge"
    But they judge us..
    They say: "Don't blame"
    Yet they blame us..
    Gather more fame..
    Elevate your sick game..

    In this world they're all the same
    In this world
    It's a gift to stay sane..

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-09-05 07:46:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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