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    dots Submission Name: Crimson Ladydots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 488
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    Bytes: 1021



    Description:
       another old piece when i started out writing.


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    dotsCrimson Ladydots
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    Where am i?
    Who is near?
    How do i hide from fear?
    I need to break away..
    Away from here.

    Where can i find her?
    She helps me confer.
    Only going into the unknown -
    Going without knowing
    Will let the truth be shown.

    Take her test
    She knows best.
    When we are one
    There's a sacred space
    Where we cannot be alone.
    To these deeds i give chase..
    To them i must atone.
    She destroys the haze..
    She becomes my home.

    Divine being in her
    Helps me conquer all life's lessons
    She removes the blur
    To all my big questions.
    At times i never want to differ.
    Freedom from pain
    Be all i want to give her..

    Sweet crimson lady
    Please become a part of me.
    I recollect thee indeed
    Whenever i am a friend in need.
    A rose i choose to follow..
    Before i start to bleed.

    -Svw




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