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    dots Submission Name: Harvester Of Sorrowdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHarvester Of Sorrowdots
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    Atop the mournful misty mountain..
    No faith to be felt or found again..
    Flowing freely from above
    He harvests hardest darkest energy of broken love.
    And sets the sorrow monster free from its cage.

    Old man falling apart,fully riddled with age
    Hungrily grabs the dagger to angrily paint his rage..
    Decaying mantis..Searching for atlantis.
    Never accepting to be free from this.

    Floating in my sea of negativity..
    Is all thats left to be.
    After i failed again..
    By killing me.

    Nothing i say can ever really sound true.
    Something lost..Weak..Futile..
    There'll be no answer for a while To carry me through.
    Strange fickle futile old man.. Do i really know you?

    Twisted-wretched, hampered love without direction
    Paves speedily-angrily the way for damned affection..
    A place for pain planted to grow.
    Emotions stirring start to overthrow.
    How can i ever deal with such sorrow?
    I'm sure the pain will be gone tomorrow..

    -Svw




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