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    dots Submission Name: "Solstice"dots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 552
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    dots"Solstice"dots
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    Sorrows' taste on her lips
    Binding in spontaneity
    Abreast as mine.
    Layered beauty.
    Completion.

    Love's sensei beckons wholly
    Exalted from neon slumber.
    Me - ajar, torn asunder
    Sublime pylon erected anew.
    Nostalgic aim levels holes.

    Fragile innocence distilled from glass.
    Renewal process as rust eraser.
    Terminal season of tears.
    Crosshaired anguish withers.
    Freedom in relinquished ashes.

    Frailty in solace faced no more.

    Passing hearts in relevance.

    Completion.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-09-05 08:13:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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