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Mint Chocolate (Fulfill Me)

Author: AeThe Lost Poet
ASL Info:    19/M/DE
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Words: 263
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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yes... written by me. i've had this for a while just never posted it...

Mint Chocolate (Fulfill Me)

Her name is mint chocolate
melts in my mouth
don’t wonder where I’m going
or question the route
I was completely hooked
from the first taste in me
a sugar fix, look her lips
form a thirst hastily—
sweet caramel,
I’m nutty for butter pecan
nutty buddy fudge and honey
A worthy lover she can
be or find,
her mind is sharp
see… she don’t waste her time
or mind the dark.
and I felt that very moment—
I owned it…
and we were meant to lock lips
even if opponents

if not-but it won’t- it will be
because that’s the only way
to fulfill me

even though this world
doesn’t pine through, mind you
life’s so fast
I’ve felt it’s been a drive through
you took my breath away
and with a buzz I’m waitin’
come quick with your lips
I need resuscitation
plus I love debatin’
with you,
I don’t need to agree girl
I just wanna kiss you

if not-but it won’t- it will be
because that’s the only way
to fulfill me

so breathe

and sigh, and gasp


is near and I’m you past

but don’t let go
the fresh snow, melts within my heart
and the ice box within now
breaks apart
a man now rise,
from the shady kid
even if he hurt inside
that’s still just the way he did

if not-but it won’t- it will be
because that’s the only way
to fulfill me

Submitted on 2009-09-05 11:45:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  the lyrics are as as good as any other top 40s pop/rap song Ive heard on the morning radios. its very cute and theres somethings just wonderfully upbeat. i think if set to music its definetly something to dance to. as much as food and candy are overused clichés in music, art, whatever, theres a reason, because the comparison is easy and people can imagine and relate, and when its a song they can bop their heads.

good work.
| Posted on 2009-10-15 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]

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