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    dots Submission Name: spring cleaningdots
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    Author: StephE
    ASL Info:    34/Female/Sacramento, CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 10/10/16
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsspring cleaningdots
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    Life is like our garden.
    'we reap what we sow'
    all of our choices,
    effect how it grows.

    Failing to clean out
    any growing weeds,
    lies a struggle to
    sprout our planted seeds.

    All it takes
    is tender loving care,
    and a happy,
    healthy garden
    will be bared.

    So look beneath
    the damage,
    you will find most can
    be salvaged.

    It's up to us
    how the garden
    will be.

    this question,
    certainly,
    nobody can flee:

    "Do I surround myself
    in plants and flowers,
    or hand over my soils
    growing power?"




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