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    dots Submission Name: Sold my soul to a Demondots
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    Author: Scaredheart
    ASL Info:    15/ Female/ NC
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 92/62/50
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSold my soul to a Demondots
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    I sold my soul to a Demon,
    I sold my soul to a Demon.
    A Demon with white wings and a Halo,
    who called me his everything.
    I've sold my soul to a Demon,
    to a Demon who wants me more.
    I've sold my soul for one reason,
    a reason too stupid to explore.
    And that's what they call love,
    a kiss of death from Romeo to Juliet?
    That's what they call love,
    two lovers dying a tragic death?
    So this is what they call love,
    something stupid you regret.
    Why not tell them about the fools,
    who share every breath?
    I've sold my soul to my Demon,
    the one who takes my breath.
    I want to belong to my Demon,
    the one I'll never forget.




    Submitted on 2009-09-05 14:20:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great work again Connie. I am once again marveled at your work. I'm not sure how you do it but ypu progress fast in writing.
    | Posted on 2009-09-05 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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