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    dots Submission Name: death influenzadots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsdeath influenzadots
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    the wave is coming,
    sweeping through all the towns,
    infecting everyone,
    no one getting up,
    one figure,
    alone in the shadows,
    stands next to me,
    'come'
    he whispers sedisticly to me,
    "i know who you are''
    i reach to him,
    touch his cloak,
    close my eyes,
    and die.




    Submitted on 2009-09-05 18:18:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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