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    dots Submission Name: Be True To Youdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 17/47/39
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    They call me so foolish
    And speak in sarcastic tones
    While covering up laughs and scowls

    They remark day in and day out
    Going round and round with them
    Is such a tiresome task, I'm not their
    Servant and certainly not their damn maid

    They look down upon me
    Because I'm from middle class
    And not afraid to break some nails

    So to get up on that stage
    And recite my childhood dreams
    Was a impossible task all on its own

    When they snickered at every word
    And whispered to their whores
    About me failing in the end

    I just wanted to run from there
    Where's the closest exit from here?
    And leave with such pride, still in tact

    But despite the cruel remarks
    That could make a toddler weep
    I stood strong and tall, till the last

    So let the memories fade
    And the years finally pass by

    Up on this stage, one last time
    Reciting that old childhood dream
    And turned such doubts upside down

    I just wanted to tell an old men's tale
    And prove to a gentlemans' whore
    That sorority doesn't get you far




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