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They caught him this time ... what happens if the next one slips under their radar
I am struck
struck by the grief by this pain
all those feelings come rushing back
I am lost!
I am gone!
For if you are meant to kill me you will
If I am meant to leave this world before my mid-twenty's I shall
I thought I had a purpose
I thought I was meant to be here
I lived through all my over doses,
I lived through that 12 gauge I placed against my stomach
Most of all I lived through your abuse!
Now ... My reality has come to a head...
I may not live through putting you behind bars!
For if these hit men are successful I will not see what I can make this life!
Nevertheless please know... I do not hate
I am the person I am because of you
Submitted on 2009-09-05 23:10:08
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