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    dots Submission Name: Gwendylln Rosedots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    19/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 451/419/172
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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    dotsGwendylln Rosedots
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    She's still little yet,
    can't breathe on her own.
    Trying to strech her wings,
    Finding her very own home.

    She doesn't know yet,
    about talking to strangers,
    or looking both ways.
    or the meaning of forever.

    But, I love her just the same.
    And know that it's my job,
    to explain the world to her.
    And all of it's goings-on.




    Submitted on 2009-09-06 14:56:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and make sure she is going to know her roots and her family.
    love:rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-09-07 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaah, this is precious!

    Thanks for sharing this jewel with us!
    | Posted on 2009-09-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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