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    dots Submission Name: Sweetie Piedots
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    Author: Orangejuice
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 518
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 568



    Description:
       I hope you like this. It was just really sweet.


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    dotsSweetie Piedots
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    Sweetie pie,
    apple of my eye,
    don't you dare cry.

    I know the clouds cry,
    but I want you to stay dry,
    please sweetie pie,
    don't cry.

    Whisper in my ear,
    don't shed a tear,
    I'll be here.

    Take my hand,
    and I'll let you rule my land,
    we'll touch the sand.

    Sweetie pie,
    apple of my eye,
    don't you dare sigh.

    Just soar up to the sky,
    I'll help you fly,
    my sweetie pie.




    Submitted on 2009-09-07 00:06:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am borderline diabetic. Sweetie pie is so sweet it may have put me over the line. I'm afraid I won't be able to look at a pie ever again. In any event I got to smile and smiles feel good. Thanks for the smile.
    | Posted on 2009-09-07 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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