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    dots Submission Name: Heartsringsdots
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    Author: thejitterBUG
    ASL Info:    15/M/xxxx
    Elite Ratio:    7.29 - 2/1/4
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 40
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1378



    Description:
       Yeah, it was supposed to be a simple friendly goodbye. But meh, I suppose even my writing can't be happy for me. Oh well. See ya!


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    dotsHeartsringsdots
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    It was twilight,
    When I saw your face.
    It was evening,
    And my heart was winning the race-

    Beating faster and faster,
    Like it was going to nowhere,
    Maybe, but then I realized
    It wasn’t scared, it was headed somewhere-

    This feeling of revenge
    Is sinking deep into my bones,
    This feeling of regret,
    Makes me want to throw stones-

    And break your bones,
    Drag your soul to hell, maybe,
    Bitter sweet resentment,
    Tears strained heart, baby-

    It all comes too natural
    That it suddenly becomes quite unbearable
    It all seems too simple
    And yet what I said were unthinkable-

    Words that cut through
    Worlds, like a knife
    Slashing you through
    And through till your life-

    Is over and done with,
    I don’t want penance,
    If I did, I’d end up
    Locked with a lifetime sentence-

    tugging at my heartstirngs,
    tugging at my soul,
    bittersweet and hopeful smiles,
    I'll be empty and not whole-

    So let me go
    Darling, say goodbye!
    This is my last night,
    So let’s leave it to the sky-

    To decide, to rain or
    To shine,
    If I’ll make it through
    The night.




    Submitted on 2009-09-08 08:56:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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