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My schedule

Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
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The first one got deleted by the hacker so I had to redo it. but im in a good mood today so its ok

My schedule

Today I'm going to treat myself
To $4.50 chicken tenders
That aren't even that great
Then I'll eat outside
And bask in the sun's warmth

When I get home from school
I'm going to take a nap
In front of the glass door
And wrap up in a blanket
Letting my cares slip away

After doing my homework
I'm going to cook my own dinner
And make something that I like
Instead of nasty shepherd's pie
That is my mom's favorite

After dinner I'm going down by the creek
Just sitting on a rock
Wondering what I'm going to do with my life
Listening to the sound of water slap the rock
Then jump in

I don't think I'm going to sleep tonight
I'm going to watch TV
Drinking Game Fuel and Dr. Pepper
Trying to stay awake
And channel surf the night away.

Submitted on 2009-09-08 09:31:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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