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    dots Submission Name: Feelingsdots
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    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 155/162/91
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Just wanted your feelings, opinions and whatnots about this... Planning to use it somewhere else next time. Thank you


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    dotsFeelingsdots
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    I think, we both love each other because of the way we feel about ourselves when we are with the other person.




    Submitted on 2009-09-08 12:10:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i understand the thought completely though im not sure its expressed as well as it could be..
    id be interested in seeing you try to make this idea into a whole poem... maybe not word for word but the sentiment behind it for sure...

    lemme know if that ever happens

    sometimes a person can make you feel so wonderful you crave to be round them.. is that shallow? that love is found through someone making you feel good about yourself? is it healthy...?

    on some level i think its healthy for sure...
    | Posted on 2009-09-09 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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