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I feel so...

Author: MyWorld
ASL Info:    21/M/IN
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76 /99 /87
Words: 147
Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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I feel so...

Surrounded by such cess
How am I supposed to have found success?
This down I feel sucks in excess
An' less I can best this rot?
My next sucess'll be in not
Continuing on
An' when you ain't got
Anything that you want
Sunlight's fire to the flesh
And, this dire need for a hire being's the dregs
Of my life and just what I
Cling to, I need to, like
I'm holding my sanity
Can I be forgiven?
No banter to my living
Panoramically even, I see no good
Damned and banished with these heathens
I just wanna know I could
Escape, make/take a new mindstate
I find my mind hyphy and I'm irate
I've yet to find anything I like in anything I make
All my worst fears fill so many of my days
That everyday is beginning to feel like I'm in a haze

Submitted on 2009-09-09 02:44:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Cling to, I need to, like
I'm holding my sanity,

i have to say that I can relate to this entirely at this moment. Truly a scary feeling to have if you have no one to share or support you.

True honesty!!! Thanks

| Posted on 2009-10-13 00:00:00 | by GoddessShakti | [ Reply to This ]

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