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    dots Submission Name: No title,dots

    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    I donít think itís possible
    Not for me
    No one could love me
    I donít think I could love anyone again
    The world is to pretty for me
    No person could look past my body
    And like what they see
    Could I just have one person
    To love me
    As who I am and what I like
    Is that a lot to ask for
    Apparently it is
    Because it canít happen

    Submitted on 2009-09-09 07:58:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw, I bet it can. I am incredibly beautiful, but everybody loves me all the same. For my , er, personality. There y'are.

    I think this poem is great because it is passionate self-expression, very directly spoken and clear, and most meaningful to yourself because it is a souvenir of what went on for your heart in particular.

    And I think it sux because of the same reasons!
    Artists work one layer over another, sometimes for years. This bald statement of fact is like the preliminary research for a poem ... why it is so important to keep every piece you write. You can never get back to this year, except by reading its poems! But your better poems will be more artificial; and if they keep this truth and passion with them, you will love them all your life and be read by many folk.

    (I'm an old man. You wouldn't have guessed, eh? Please forgive how I talk.)
    | Posted on 2009-09-13 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]

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