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    dots Submission Name: Brokendots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBrokendots
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    Inside me is a broken person, a sad little girl who just wants attention. I think when I first started cutting, she was the reason. Not the reason why I continued, but the reason I started. She was the reason for the sudden crash into 'loving' Ryan, and Riju. She was the reason for the phone...um.. interaction with Wesley, the drunken..moment with Tom.
    I actually went against her judgment today, which made me slightly sick. It may mean I lose the attention of a..stalker? Hacker? Mysterious person whose name I don't know..but maybe it will mean that I will gain something..
    I don't know what but maybe...




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      Hey i actually understood the poem. i had no idea you felt this way. :)

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    | Posted on 2009-09-11 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]


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