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    dots Submission Name: Serenity Pt.2dots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 278
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsSerenity Pt.2dots

    Serenity is a special divinity
    Powered by infinity..
    To create
    The sacred trinity -
    The sublime source to reaching
    A divined state of mind..
    To show is feeling a new way of teaching.
    To feel is a diffferent way of seeing kind..

    Serenity is feeling the sun..
    Not owing anyone..
    Its about having peace of mind..
    To hold memories lovingly..
    To rewind..
    Smoothing the psyche to unwind seamlessly
    And rebind blissfully..
    An unparalelled kiss to me..
    This is what it means to be free.

    To teach Serenity cannot be done.
    Only living obediently, not harming anyone
    Will lead you to the true one..
    The one you are.
    Your inner being..
    Its whats worth seeing
    Once you understand to start feeling
    In what you are living..
    This be in what you should be striving.

    Beware, the world can be
    Unforgiving, beriddling..deceiving..
    Peeling away at your sense of being.
    So to be strong cannot lead you wrong..
    To walk this way will show new ways of seeing.
    Serenely taste the truths of believing..
    In knowing these things there'll be no leaving.

    Serenity keeps me strong
    Shes been helping me along.
    In her i find the eye in the storm.
    My heart sings everlong..
    Peaceful it is to assume correct form.

    I want to thank you for being my Serenity.
    I feel obtuse at times
    But thoughts of you give me power to rise..
    There grows calmness over me
    When memories visit me..
    Woes departing..
    Setting me free..

    All i can truly say is Thank you.
    Thank you for carrying me through.

    A rose you've given me to conquer the blue.


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