Satan finally written as a metaphorical figure, rather than some jerk with a pitchfork. Kudos to you. Even with a rhyme scheme, this was a very readable and enjoyable write. Your creativity is rapidly improving from submission to submission, but your vision has been very clear from the start.
this is gorgeous. how did i miss this? ive read just about every one of your poems and this one just slipped right by. but it really struck me. evil comes disguised as an angel of light. that is so very true. he whispers lies to us and , well i at least, am a little kid that look up with big round eyes, so trusting. such a fool.
"to cleverly create from you a sly sinner.."
that line was my favorite. as always, beautifully written friend.
We so quickly blame satan for all things that go badly.
Despite my personal beliefs, I enjoyed this. The wording is intelligent, and shows that you have a lot of talent. It flows nicely, though some lines are longer than others.
Some of the words you rhymed were somewhat expected since they're used frequently in poems, but it didn't really take anything away from the piece.