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    dots Submission Name: You didnt have to....(never be the same)dots

    Author: SpoonieD
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 4/3/25
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsYou didnt have to....(never be the same)dots

    I missed my revolution, my run away train, chose to curl up into a bottle instead of dance in the rain.... I look back confused..only with myself..only with myself to balme.
    Follow me now, and shape some clones. If you dont have yours? Then your on your own?....... I look back confused..only with myself.. only myslef to blame.
    Ive played in the light, whilst harbouring the dark. I flirted with the unknown.. only for a spark... I look back confused... with only myself..only myslef to blame.
    I am not great, I have hurt them, as you have hurt those, these eyes can love to hate.. I look back confused... with only myself... only myself to blame.
    I had to live, unapposed to die, when you look deep and find nothing, whats to give?...I look back confused.. with only myself... only myself to blame.
    Tonight, though, tonight... It would all start tonight. Its been along time to shake this feeling, but I can live with it, with you.. in sight.
    I look back..no longer confused.. only with you... it will never be the same.

    Submitted on 2009-09-10 09:26:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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