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    dots Submission Name: Push Your Luckdots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPush Your Luckdots
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    You know some people say not to push your luck or a blessing only comes around once.

    Iím living proof saying that it comes around twice.

    Other people claim that broken hearts cannot mend, or pleasant thoughts cannot be found in animosity.

    Funny but all I see in tranquility, like flying above the clouds during a storm.

    Calmness is in our spirit, peacefulness surrounds our interactions.

    Iím comforted by putting forth an effort to comfort.

    Iím supported by putting forth an effort to support.

    For that is what makes us free.

    That is what makes us push our luck to find that higher height.

    Close your eyes and come with me to this place, feel that raw desire, that yearning for companionship and find innocence, find peace.

    I feel every morsel of pain, every tinge of anxiety.

    I share the stress, the pain, talk to me and burden me with your love.




    Submitted on 2009-09-10 13:39:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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