For His Own Amusement by Childe-Wrote

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Submission Name: For His Own Amusement dots

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Author:	Childe-Wrote
Elite Ratio:	1.86 - 17/47/39
Words:	150

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	43
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	1002

Description:
I had gotten this idea when I went to visit my Ex
And soon realized I still had feelings for him
So as of now, I'm dedicating this to him

For His Own Amusement dots

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Her body cried out for his touch
But her mind went against his words

So the Angels tried pulling her away
When her lips met his for that last time

While the Demons complained loudly
That Heaven shouldn't even affair

But a young man stepped forward
And demanded them to back on down

When they didn't have the right to play
With a young girl's heart like this

But another stepped forward
And decided to challenge the holy

When things got out of hand
And her heart on the line

God demanded Lucifer to back down
Lucifer laughed and simply replied

"Why not let the girl.. feel more pain"
God Scowled at him and shook his head
"She's not a pawn in your game anymore"

Red in the face and fire in those eyes
Lucifer upped the stakes "just watch me"

Submitted on 2009-09-13 01:26:35 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
A fight between Lucifer & God = God always wins! Don't let love hurt ya hun!
| Posted on 2009-09-14 00:00:00 | by PrincessVenom | [ Reply to This ]
Can you provide any description for this.. I could not really see whats the inner meaning.... .. !!!
| Posted on 2009-09-13 00:00:00 | by kavya | [ Reply to This ]

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