With Deepest Regards -------------------------------------------
I’ll stay up all night just to see your face.
To listen to your voice is sweet enough.
I’ll stay by your side when you cannot-
This is nothing but everything.
Speak to me Love.
Tell me of your heart.
Let me learn from you.
Parting is something I will not
When the sun rises tomorrow
I’ll still be here by your side
proving you are worth more
than your eyes will ever tell you.
Fall into my arms.
I will hold you
through the night so
the pain will go away.
I’ll take care of you
with everything
that I have to give
I will make you safe here.
You have my heart
Hold on tightly
And I will care for yours.
Don’t ever let go Darling.
And I will be there whenever you need
Because I will never leave your side
I will catch you before you fall.
Call my name and just look beside you.
This is where you will find me.
One day it will all be over
and you will understand.
You will see how beautiful you are.
Don't listen to clayman!
Those are ok suggestions, but then the poem looses it's meaning.
I really like this one. :D
It pretty simple, but I know what you are writing about what probably has a lot of meaning to you.
Keep writting Jeremy...your style is quite different than what I normally like but...I can see how much meaning what you write about has to you. I know you are not just writing a poem just to write a poem and you seem to write as if you know everything has a special meaning. Like with the banana. I love that about your writing. I also love nanners. <3
I would like to read more. You used to write a lot, where has all that writing gone?
And how is that story going that you had started on?
Did you post it somewhere? And if you didn't at least email it to me! It's been a while and I am sure you have continued on.
I havn't spoken to you in a while....
I hope things are going well.
Beautiful piece this, i do have a suggestion or two : in the line "parting is something i will not" it seems incomplete, inconclusive somehow, maybe you should complete it with "do" or "consider" as in "parting is something i will not do". Other than that the poem is beautiful and great, i would add a bit of color or description though to spice it up a bit. A good read, thanks for sharing.
Submission Name: With Deepest Regards
