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    dots Submission Name: the moondots

    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsthe moondots

    someone once asked me
    if i believed i love
    as first i said no
    that i just watched
    from my pertch in the sky
    as loved lived and died
    down there on earth
    then i began to realize
    that i am in love
    i chase her every moment
    threw night and day
    i get to see her
    two times a year
    and from those few moments
    of time spent together
    we make the most of it
    thus there is a new star born
    so do i believe in love
    yes i do
    it is something amazing
    that you have to chase down
    and keep up with
    for all of your life

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