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    dots Submission Name: Soar Baby, Soar. dots

    Author: Eyamma
    ASL Info:    16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 22/21/77
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 891
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       I wrote this up some time ago and thought it might be a nice addition to my small collection. [That was recently deleted] Grawr. >.<"

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    dotsSoar Baby, Soar. dots

    I think Iím sure
    Iím ready to jump from the highest mountain
    And maybe on decline, Iíll learn to fly
    Become one with the stars, because baby, you illuminate me
    On my skin, the passing wind
    It screams my name and, ďI hear!Ē
    Iíve woven my eyes shut, only feeling your guiding hand
    So that I can believe, what I canít see
    And on decline, Iíll fly
    I smell the sunshine again, butterfly wings, let my heart soar
    Promise me here and now, youíll stay
    Youíll stay, stay awake
    Take my hand
    Come back to the land,
    Youíre frightening me
    If you fall Iíve got to know,
    On decline, youíll spread your wings,
    And fly

    Submitted on 2009-09-14 12:57:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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