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    dots Submission Name: Un-escapable Consumptiondots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 45
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    dotsUn-escapable Consumptiondots
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    In the distance,
    I see darkness approaching
    there is no escape
    it comes from every angle
    so no matter where i run
    i am consumed by the night
    the night is dark
    and darkness is fear
    fear so overwhelming
    I hide
    from everything and everyone
    but unfortunately
    i cannot hide from myself
    I can't escape the thoughts
    constantly eating me alive
    from the inside out
    so no one will know
    until it is too late
    i am not fully consumed
    but i am sinking quick
    please, help me
    it won't be long before i'm gone
    grab my hand
    before i'm unreachable
    and pull me out
    like only you can




    Submitted on 2009-09-14 14:55:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This sounds a little bit like one of my poems called "drowning." You should check it out if you get the chance. But this was a really good poem. I like it.
    | Posted on 2009-09-15 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]



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