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    dots Submission Name: walk outdots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotswalk outdots
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    I do everything in spite of what i want
    ignoring the memories and thoughts that haunt
    finally felt i was going somewhere
    felt like somebody actually cared
    all i want is everything i'm not
    i look at you and its everything you've got
    i am nothing a pile of dust
    a car on cinder blocks left to rust
    you are a diamond shining bright
    you're the star that gets me through the night
    i am the one who brought you pain
    you're the one who got me through the rain
    all i want is a hug and kiss
    to remind me i am the one you miss
    you're the one i want with me when my world falls apart
    you're the one i know can fix my broken heart
    what happened to the love we used to share?
    why do i feel like you're barely there?
    can anything go back to how it used to be?
    when we were both happy because we were free
    what is this thing, silenced between you and I?
    the tension makes me think back to suicide
    I love you now like never before
    but i'm still afraid the day will come when you'll walk out the door




    Submitted on 2009-09-14 15:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You got hacked too? The title and the first sentence? Happened to me too. It's really annoying but I think my friends stopped it. The poem was great though.
    | Posted on 2009-09-15 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]



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