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    dots Submission Name: A Fallen Angel: Vol. I: 8dots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    ASL Info:    20/F/CT
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 44/69/91
    Words: 601
    Class/Type: Story/Being a Teen
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       chapter 8


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    dotsA Fallen Angel: Vol. I: 8dots
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    As Fallyn was walking home, she got a text message. She could feel the vibration on her thigh. Taking it out, she saw that it was from Missy. Reading the message, it read: Come over my house.

    Fallyn replied with another text. It read: Alright on my way!

    Instead of taking a left to go home, she took a right to go towards Missy's house.

    Missy was in detention at the moment. Fallyn didn't know that. It would only take her about five minutes to get to her house and detention lasts at least an hour.

    Fallyn walked up to Missy's front door. Giving it a good, loud knock then waiting.

    A boy came to the door after opening it. He had only a towel on and seemed to be soaking wet. His hair was dripping and he was holding his towel. She wasn't sure if he was in the shower or just took a dip in the pool when he heard the knock.

    Fallyn just stared for a few minutes. It was like a dream. He seemed perfect in every way. His body was chistled. It looked like he had an eight pack instead of a six pack. It seemed as though he came out of a modelling magazine.

    She couldn't help but stare at him. His eyes were gleaming and so trance-like. They were blue. The most amazing blue color she had ever seen.

    Shaking her head some, she came back to reality. Giving him a smile now, she was slightly nervous.

    "Oh! You must be Fallyn. Missy told me about you." he gave her a smirk. "She didn't mention how hot you were though." he told her.

    "Oh!" she blushed some. Her cheeks were extremely red and she was trying to avoid eye contact with him.

    "You can come in if you want."he said to her as he opened the door.

    Fallyn nodded then walked inside. Trying to steer clear of him. Well at least trying not to touch him.

    Looking around the home, she could tell it was a nice place and the family was wealthy. The home made her wonder why Missy didn't wear nicer clothes.

    Jack walked past her with a smile on his face. He went to the couch and sat down. Fallyn felt a little on the awkward side since he didn't go and get dressed.

    "You okay?" he asked noticing the look on her face.

    Fallyn nodded nervously. Even though she said she was alright, she really wasn't. Lying wasn't something she was very good at or even wanted to do to anyone.

    "Actually, no I'm not." she looked down slightly ashamed of lying to a complete stranger. Just being alone with him made her feel bad as well.

    "Anything I can do?" he asked trying to make her feel better.

    Fallyn shook her head and looked down as she thought some.

    "No, I think I should go though." she said and turned to leave.

    "If you want but I wish you would stay." he said kindly.

    "I'm sorry." she said before running out of the house.

    As she ran, tears had formed and rolled down her cheeks. She was feeling worse and worse every few seconds. She had run all the way home.

    When she got home, she ran up to her room. Locking the door after she closed it.

    Now she was laying in her bed, face down in her pillow, crying her eyes out.




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