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    dots Submission Name: The Best Guardian Knows When to Turn a Blind Eyedots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    22/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.66 - 167/183/82
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsThe Best Guardian Knows When to Turn a Blind Eyedots
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    Stop thinking please, it's easier.
    This all will pass, this smoke will clear.
    The stitches heal, don't pull them free.
    The ground will one day stop trembling.

    With eyes on the surface,
    your fears are out of view.
    It's a better way of looking at it,
    even if it doesn't make sense to you.

    What floats down 'neath the water,
    will scare the soul right out of you.






    Submitted on 2009-09-15 01:45:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Shorter and lifeless. What's happening Keegan?
    | Posted on 2009-09-17 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]


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