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    dots Submission Name: cuts and my paindots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Fuck it all
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    dotscuts and my paindots
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    it's my love you never see
    it's the love you never gave
    it's the hitts i recieved every day
    the threats you always say
    the blood going down my arms
    the blood that always saw
    the excuse you always hear
    can't you see that i know
    that you have never cared
    just hate me like i know you do
    let me live the way i want
    with out the pain you always give




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