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    dots Submission Name: i miss youdots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 277
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1497



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    dotsi miss youdots
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    i miss you baby
    i miss your eyes your smile your kiss
    the way you hold me the way you console me is what i miss
    i really love you, you have no idea
    whenever you're gone i long for you to be near
    my feelings for you explode when i see your face
    at 2 in the morning, i'll run to you with no haste
    everything about you lingers in my mind
    all i want to do is hold you and call you mine
    you're the only one for me
    everyone says "there's other fish in the sea"
    but ever since i met you i knew you were the one for me
    i want to spend the rest of my life only with you
    you might think its silly but i'm telling you its true
    every second you're gone i miss you more and more
    if i ever lost you i know my tears would pour
    if you ever said goodbye
    i think that i would die
    i love you more than i love myself
    everyone tells me thats bad for my health
    i'll risk my life for 5 mins with you
    everything i do, i do it all for you
    i'd give up my life to save you
    just to prove how much i love you
    baby, i can't live without you
    i know, i know, its sad but true
    i miss you baby
    i miss your eyes your smile your kiss
    the way you look at me and hold me is what i miss
    i love every inch of you
    and if you ever left me
    i would not know what to do




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