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    dots Submission Name: Horrible.dots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I miss them, I miss the talks we used to have, the crushes I had, I miss the way that they made me feel about myself. I hate that it seems I just dropped them like that. I know it looks as if I haven't thought about them since the day I left. But I have, ever since I left their house for that supposed to be summer vacation I've thought of them almost everyday.
    I wish I could go back and tell them. Every time I try and write it just seems stupid, and like some horrid attempt at a fake apology.
    I guess I could send this to them, or the link to this page, but I still feel like I'm not writing enough, pouring enough of myself into it to show that I'm not just writing words that other people have already written.




    Submitted on 2009-09-16 04:15:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, they never did come back to me. I had to go back to them. They are just the same as when I left. Some new one's, some of the old timers are gone. But it's basically all the same. Everyone remembers me and still loves me. I got a lot of hugs.
    | Posted on 2009-09-19 00:00:00 | by esterhzys | [ Reply to This ]
      Keep your faith. Do what you told me. If they love you and you leave them they will come back to you one day anyway.
    | Posted on 2009-09-17 00:00:00 | by esterhzys | [ Reply to This ]


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