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    dots Submission Name: Your Shadows Take My Lifedots

    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsYour Shadows Take My Lifedots

    Its so hard to understand why you pushed away.
    You didnt want to touch me.
    I tried everything to make you see.
    I do still love you, I just cant save you.

    I dont know how you think
    I do not prove my love
    Cant show to you
    What i dont get too.

    I gave you all i could,
    But it was never enough.
    So you went to her.
    And gave all your love.

    Its never an easy phrase.
    I love you is hardly ment now days,
    When i looked you in the eyes
    All i saw was "I love you lies"

    Yet you say i am the one
    Who never cared, Who Never loved,
    Dont ever think you waited alone,
    When i needed you the most,
    You just walked away.

    Yes times change,
    And yes people too
    If Love has to die,
    Then with it does my life.

    The chance to try is gone,
    In your game i was a pawn,
    You so delicately played me,
    Now heres te chance to save me.

    The debt is paied with my blood,
    My heart ripped out Dropped into the mud.
    The band aid for the mortal wound,
    Will wear off with tears from your eyes soon,.

    You just had to tell me,
    What i was doing wrong,
    I could have tried to fix it,
    But instead you continued to break it.

    My time is near,
    My death, My dear,
    This is the end,
    Your Love for me a sin.

    Do not take in vain,
    Or forsake my name,
    And now my conscious turns blue.
    Know that i Always loved you.

    Submitted on 2009-09-16 14:43:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      there were a few lines that really stood out to me. "I do still love you, I just cant save you."
    especially, i can relate to it all too well. ive dealt with a simalar situation..its just not worth it. but with trials come errors..and errors provide knowledge.
    it was a good piece..tho i think it got a little sloppy from the middle to end..
    | Posted on 2009-09-18 00:00:00 | by FadedSilence | [ Reply to This ]

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