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white dust


Author: SilentDreams42
Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38 /30 /42
Words: 31
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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it will probably mean different things to different people

idk


white dust



white dust,

grab it and rip it to shreds
shatter it to pieces
until it is no more

I beg you-
steal my you soul,
you bastard




Submitted on 2009-09-16 17:49:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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