Thanks! It was a really good poem that seemed to really describe a feeling of desperation I sometimes feel within me! It was good because it never lost its flow, you allowed the reader to follow you from stanza to stanza. Sometimes that can be a hard thing to do!
I sometimes wonder if in the end when nothing really matters if the only thing ill feel is regret. The regret of knowing that i didn't try hard enough, the regreat of knowing that i didn't really accomplish much. Im a procrastinator and the source of my procrastination is my fear of trying and failing.
but anyways good write, it was a pleasure to read.
Submission Name: Break Me
