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    dots Submission Name: To Alexandrina,...dots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 342
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 34
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2073



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       My ardor's heroine, elegant and multifarious by an axiom of my extol


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    dotsTo Alexandrina,...dots
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    what do you see when you look in my eyes?
    when i look in your's
    i see a new welcomed stranger to my heart
    undoubtedly you are, so far
    ye undoubted, endure my endeavor
    such is a venture only you
    savvy and of sagacity, are woman enough to endure upon
    a sacred smile and glowing corona of your visage
    in pusuit of a meaning i was through it's allure
    if i had looked into that ocular abyss for an instance beyond which i had
    i might've seen that which my soul yearns
    yet the fact being that i may never reap, ad infinitum
    although my essence was a tad fearful of what it could imagine
    i couldn't help look into your gaze once again
    to see a hint of what i desire but can't define alone
    for it is but of a human's wish to see it's future
    even may it chance breaking the crystal of hereafter, the unknown
    so i need you there, as i may foresee that spell
    through your eyes once again
    a future, you must be a part of
    for you are our forteller of fates
    without you i have no fortune of infinite jubilance
    together we shall know this as one
    alone we no longer feel the need to be
    as we have found a relief, a peace
    in one another, we shall be as one
    till the end of time we part
    my heart passions for an existence
    such as true as it can imagine with you
    Alexandrina shoulder naught your past
    for you are your man's defender
    and what is a man, but of his heart,
    and you have mine, this, you watch over and captivate intensely
    secure it in this crushed manner along with it's wounds and curses
    for it was created with the softest, sanguine silk
    and remedied with serene unspoiled veins
    designed under the aegis and virtue of
    my synchronic compassionate yet passionate desire for you
    for my angelic Angelica,
    where ever you may go ultimately,
    take me with you




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