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    dots Submission Name: this is the last time, i promisedots
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    Author: FadedSilence
    ASL Info:    21/nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    1.24 - 124/113/51
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 614
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    dotsthis is the last time, i promisedots
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    I cant believe you have no limit
    no remorce, hesitation or regret
    i dont understand why you do it
    and how you dont see it fit
    for us to have a healthy friendship..

    instead you cause drama and pain
    and even with all the love i gave
    you cant help but hurt me and to take
    and you expect me to sit and wait
    and every time i expect a clean slate..

    All you can do is talk shit and lie
    and many times youve hindered my life
    got me kicked out, family fights
    too many wrongs, not enough rights
    and i took you back many times

    i have nothing left to give to you
    there used to be nothing i wouldnt do
    and even if you asked me to
    this time i refuse to be a fool
    the games you're playing are too cruel

    what you've done cant be fixed
    and all i can do is reminese
    because no matter how hard i wish
    you cant change any of this
    so this is the last time, i promise




    Submitted on 2009-09-18 01:54:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I have to say that I don't even need to write the poem I was going to write tonight because you pretty much said it for me! I've been right there with you...
    | Posted on 2009-09-18 00:00:00 | by Lynda | [ Reply to This ]
      I had the same exact problem with my ex best friend. I totally get it. You have know idea.
    | Posted on 2009-09-18 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]


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