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    dots Submission Name: obsessive lustdots
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    Author: Mooncatcher
    ASL Info:    20 / F / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 20/37/19
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Alone
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    Description:
       I have an obsessive lust need addiction for this boy he's not good in any way he's horrible and mean and expliots me but I go back oh how I would even crawl back on hands and knees through glass and barbed wire..no that's pushing it... but you get it he's like my own personal drug just made to seduce me.


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    dotsobsessive lustdots
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    I want you
    I need you
    I think I think I think I love you.

    Im addicted to your seduction
    Im in need of your eruption
    Im captured by an attraction
    Im giving you my devotion

    But it doesn't matter
    I've tried
    So many attempts to capture a piece: of your attention.

    So many times trying to feel a scrap: of your emotion.

    Every time you take a bite: out of a reflection.

    It's Sent whirling into the deapths of corruption.

    This is where it gets interesting...
    Your
    Pulling away.(doesn'twork).Playing a game.(doesntwork).Teasing calling names.(doesnt work).
    Lie...lie...lie...lie...lie...lie some more
    There's no care.
    And still your all that's wanted.




    Submitted on 2009-09-18 09:03:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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