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    dots Submission Name: The True Villaindots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    17/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 34/63/78
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 41
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    Bytes: 970



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    dotsThe True Villaindots
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    I stand above the world, laughing at them
    As my cylindrical dragons streak across the sky
    You ask me...why?
    My armies march
    My name is chanted
    I am your God, you Judge, your Jury
    And I'm your executioner
    Prepare yourself, boy

    This could have been avoided
    This need not be
    A thousand children screaming in the night
    Millions lost
    All that pain, all that suffering, for what?
    For a mistake made long ago
    For the wrong decision
    For her

    She's crying, and I tell her to shut up
    I'm staring into your God complex, smiling
    Is this how it ends?
    Why so silent, my love?
    She's still crying, will she ever stop?
    And then, the lever is pulled
    And your will splits through my heart
    Leaving me in my own blood

    A million lives saved
    For the price of one broken heart




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