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    dots Submission Name: Alexanderdots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    17/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 34/63/78
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 34
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    dotsAlexanderdots
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    Hilarious, I know
    The circumstances of a love parting
    Asking oneself “what if?”
    When the answer is so very clear

    Were we meant to love?
    Or were we meant to learn?
    Was I meant to stand at your side...
    ...or above you?

    Just as you stared at them
    So have I, my love
    From the top of the world
    Your kingdom has expanded

    Your welcome
    It was my doing, right?
    Though centuries have passed
    Your legacy is still known

    My dearest Alexander
    It's my deepest regret
    That we missed one another
    Passing through the Doors of Time





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